I am more of a structual person, if you may not have noticed :3
I absolutely love the forest feeling I get from this, and if that's what you were going for congrats!
The beginning is amazing, setting the atmosphere and tone of the piece, with that immense reverb and calming synths, then adding some of that background ear candy. Then the melodies kick in, and it just gets better. I hear a slight tempo change in the buildup, and then the drop is just amazing. Like, have no words for it. Seriously. The key changes are a little weird, but pretty easy. The melody instruments are also a little too video-game like, but that's personal preference. Then the ending is just PERFECT. Ending with what we began with. Amazing, indeed.
I think the only gripe I have for this one is that some of the mixing IS a little whack, with the melody maybe being a little too loud. But other than that, good job!
Mixing: 3/5
Melodies: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Final Result: 4.5/5